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Need to make sure the POV is consistent. The story should be tightly focused on Sarah's perspective, her internal thoughts and feelings as she deals with the impending departure. Use sensory details to convey her emotions and the environment.

To the neighbors passing by on Warren Avenue, it was just another business succumbing to the digital age. To Sarah, it was the dismantling of a kingdom. Her father had built this place— Al-Amal Antiques —on the promise that every object carried a soul, a piece of the Levant or the Maghreb that could anchor a displaced family to their roots. UsePOV.23.09.04.Sarah.Arabic.Everything.Must.Go...